3rd and 4th jump have bad take off timing. Its too slow and seems to glide. The first 3 jumps are good but lack some exaggeration, I would have assumed most of the time the character is having a VERY hard time balancing. This one makes him not just confident but in control. I'd like to see him loose control and almost lucky to get to the other side unless you don't want that. Its so cool seeing you get to these stages ameer, kudos.
Thanks for your comment Yaz, I have to work on the jumps.. at the end yeah,its too floaty... the timing at the first half of the animation is good, but the 2nd need more work. I wanted a confident feeling, but seems that a lucky one is more entertaining for the audience, I'll see what I can do about that.one more week then Its the last assignment for this class, damn man it's flying fast!
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3rd and 4th jump have bad take off timing. Its too slow and seems to glide. The first 3 jumps are good but lack some exaggeration, I would have assumed most of the time the character is having a VERY hard time balancing. This one makes him not just confident but in control. I'd like to see him loose control and almost lucky to get to the other side unless you don't want that. Its so cool seeing you get to these stages ameer, kudos.
Yazan
Thanks for your comment Yaz,
I have to work on the jumps..
at the end yeah,its too floaty...
the timing at the first half of the animation is good, but the 2nd need more work. I wanted a confident feeling, but seems that a lucky one is more entertaining for the audience, I'll see what I can do about that.one more week then Its the last assignment for this class, damn man it's flying fast!
Yup time flies. Make sure you put in as many hours as possible to really exercise your new skills, cause thats how you'll get better.
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